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Hello! I’m Viper (she/her), a 25-year-old Warhammer 40k obsessed human. I’ve been an avid fan of 40k for the past 4 years which has now filled my life with miniatures, books, games, and merchandise. As an expression of my passion for this universe, I wanted to finally try and bring my own fan-OCs to life and build a story that’ll hopefully reach a fraction of how good the best of Black Library is. ♥

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The Last Words of Elyza Redwood

“I was only three when they arrived. Their ships split the skies, their legions fell like fire, and my parents died as martyrs in the Emperor’s Light. I have never forgotten.”

Jayvia’s streets blazed with color. Banners of the Tau’s sigil hung between towers, and every wall was plastered with posters of unity—smiling humans and xenos, arms linked as though they had never been at war. Children darted between legs, laughing as they chased paper kites shaped like sleek alien vessels. Musicians played from balconies, their songs drowning out thought with the rhythm of celebration. Elyza walked among them, her father’s faded coat heavy on her shoulders, her gaze fixed on the avenue ahead.

“They call it liberation. They call it peace. They call it the Greater Good. But I remember the ashes, the glassed bastions, the orphans wandering the rubble. They would see it forgotten. I will not forget.”

A Water Caste envoy leaned down with a bowl of fruit. Small hands reached eagerly, children giggling as they took what was offered and scattered back into the crowd. At the avenue’s heart, the Ethereal moved with calm precision, pausing for each outstretched hand, speaking words too soft for Elyza to hear but enough to make the crowd ripple with warmth. People pushed forward not to demand, but to touch, to brush his robes as though the act alone could bring solace.

“They placed me in a foster house. A human mother, a Tau husband. They thought me blind. But the Emperor opened my eyes. From my fellow man did I find the Lectitio Divinitatus, and from that day I knew the truth: the alien is the enemy, as it has always been. In the God-Emperor’s footsteps, I follow.”

Elyza forced her way deeper into the crowd. A woman, weeping openly, reached for the Ethereal’s hand, and he bent low to whisper to her. The grief on her face softened into something gentler, as if pain itself had ebbed under his gaze. Elyza’s stomach turned. To her it was proof not of kindness, but of manipulation, sorcery hidden in a smile.

“Today is Liberation Day, they say. Today they celebrate their chains. But today I will break them. Today I fulfill my duty.”

Her hand brushed inside her coat, fingers grazing the weight of steel and wire pressed to her chest. The press of the crowd became suffocating—laughter and cheers ringing louder, brighter, every face turned toward the parade. Her heart beat in time with the drumline above, each pulse another step toward destiny.

The Ethereal’s eyes found her. For the first time, Elyza felt the weight of his gaze—not a predator’s, but the look of someone who saw her, truly saw her, amid the sea of faces. His lips curved into a smile, soft, unguarded. He extended his hand toward her, not in command, but in welcome.
And for a heartbeat, she faltered. No monster, no tyrant—only warmth. A future she had been denied. But faith crushed doubt.

“Suffer not the alien to live.”

Elyza pulled her coat wide. The crowd gasped. A child cried out, the sharp sound piercing the fanfare. The Ethereal’s hand did not draw back. Even as fear flickered across his features, he remained there, reaching.

She pressed the trigger.

A white-hot flash swallowed the avenue, brighter than banners, louder than cheers.

When the fire faded, smoke curled through the ruins. Broken banners clung to blackened walls. The cries of children echoed in the streets.

And her words remained, etched in memory like scripture: Suffer not the alien to live.


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Glossary for those new to the 40k universe :

Imperium : Galactic wide empire led by the Lords of Terra (Earth) and united under the God Emperor of Mankind
Warp : Immaterial plane parallel to the real world where the laws of physics do not apply. Every Human’s soul is tied to this realm, where emotions are made manifest. Home to Chaos.
Archenemy : The forces of Chaos, daemons and heretics that follow dark Gods.
Imperial Knight : Bipedal house sized machine of war piloted by a single soul. There exists multiple different variants, each varying in size and weaponry (Armigers , Questoris , Cerastus , Dominus). They usually serve under a House led by a Monarch. There exist loyalist and heretical versions.
Inquisition : organization divided into three ordos (Hereticus/Malleus/Xenos) that seek to route out enemies of the Imperium in relative secrecy.
Astra Militarum : Imperial Guard, main fighting force of the Imperium
Navis Imperialis : Imperial Navy, responsible for the fleets of starships of the Imperium
Adeptus Astartes/Space Marine : Genetically enhanced super-human capable of facing the toughest of battles
Adeptus Mechanicus/Mechanicum : Order of priests that worship technology and the Omnissiah (Machine God), equally adept at maintaining such technology
Servitor : Lobotomized or artificially grown human designed to serve the Imperium as a biomechanical computer.
Psyker : Rare gene allowing a human to chanel energy from the warp to manifest supernatural powers such as throwing lightning or reading minds.

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